Feedback from Draft

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We got a lot of useful feedback for our draft. We got some feedback on the structure of our editing as in one scene it doesn't quite make sense as one person hangs up on a phone and another is still speaking on their phone. This helped us as we could fix this to make it more continuous and easy to follow, also it lead to us watching our clip closer and looking for other mistakes of the same type which we found with a bag as it was being closed in one scene and in another he was still looking in it. We got a lot of positive feedback on our shot variation which is good as i tried to this whilst i was filming.